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Mohammed’s Adventure Story

Mohammed was asked to write a short adventure piece that involved a portal. He planned his essay, wrote a draft, edited it and then typed it up. His use of vocabulary ‘desperate’, ‘golden’, ‘magical’ keeps us engaged as readers. It is a great achievement and we are very proud of him.

Notice that Mohammed’s story is not finished. Perhaps you could add to the story and post it in the comments below.

THE ALIENS

I was using my laptop and I heard a big bang. I went over to go and look. Suddenly, I was in space and I saw aliens. They put me in a cell and I tried to get out, but I could not escape. So I was trapped for 2 days and then I’d had enough and I broke out of the cell and ran away. They were chasing me and I was desperate to escape. I saw a golden magical box and I was so happy because I jumped in it and I went back home. Except it was not home. I realised I was in the wrong house and the wrong country…

 

 

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