Albert bus

Albert’s letter of complaint

We have been doing lots of role play to inspire writing this half term. Albert loves playing with the toy bus and pretending he is a passenger or a driver. In one role play session Albert played a dissatisfied passenger on a 345 bus and he used this as inspiration for his writing below.

Dear bus depot

I am wirting to make an ofiashall complant. At four o clock this afteroon I got on the 345 to Clapham to go to a wedding. I was so angry when I got off the bus because my troures were covered in sticky chotale cake! I had to bin them and they were my favortoue.

I want my money back for my ticket and my silk toruesrs wich were £100.

I hope I have a sorry leatter come thorhg the post soon.

Robin Sanchez



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