Larni and Raphael – Persuasive Writing to Toys “R” Us


Children at CW have made their own board games! Larni and Raphael made creative maths games and wrote letters to persuade Dave Brandon, the CEO of Toys “R”Us, to stock their game. Click below to read their letters – I would be persuaded, wouldn’t you?

Raphael’s Letter

Larni’s letter


  1. Dear Raphael,
    I do not work for Toys’R’Us but I wish I did! Your game sounds amazing and incorporates two of my favourite things; Maths and pizza. I wish I had of had a game like this when I was learning equivalent fractions, it sounds great fun.
    Yours Sincerely
    (Maths teacher and pizza eater)

  2. Dear Raphael,

    We all think your game sounds phenomenal! What better way to learn about fractions than with pizza! We would love to have an opportunity to play your game and if we were the owners of Toys’R’Us, we would indeed purchase your game so we hope it hits the market soon. Also you’re persuasive letter was extremely compelling, Miss F and Miss B were exceptionally proud.

    Yours sincerely,

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