Emma’s Thorpe Park Trip

Emma recently went on an exciting trip with her school friends to Thorpe Park. She was then asked to write a recount of her day, thinking carefully about the features of this text type such as writing in the past tense, using the first person and writing in chronological order. She enjoyed adding images to her writing to show her favourite rides and her finished piece of writing was great. 

One comment

  1. Wow! I loved your vocabulary use Emma – particularly the words ‘meandering’, ’emotional’ and ‘excitement.’ I haven’t been to Thorpe Park since I was a child, but your writing has inspired me to go again, thank you.
    Charlotte (Teacher at Chelsea and Westminster Hospital)

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